December 11, 2009 Final ENG 101 Blog

This week was all about getting our portfolio's ready. We started off monday with getting our portfolio's ready by looking over our own portfolio projects. We continued to look over them, and then we partnered up with a classmate. Myself and a classmate switched our portfolio with our papers and we checked over our papers. We were suppose to point out ways to expand ideas and fix grammatical errors. I made several comment reguarding the structure of the paper, and wrote comments to fix the works cited, as he really didn't have realiable sources. After helping him with the papers I looked at my paper to see what I needed to fix. Then the rest of the week I work on revisions and expanded on ideas, fix grammatical errors, and changed some sentence structure. After looking over my papers I fixed my sources for my paper. I had wikipedia 3 times in a paper, and since it's not a reliable source, I had to change. I looked up some sites and I changed all 3. After fixing my works cited I proofread my papers. I then picked out my blog for my portfolio. For my blog I picked out the one where I discussed the guest speaker who went to Sierre Leone. I felt like a blog about beah was a good choice for my portfolio. After I picked out my blog I picked out my beah discussion post. For the post I picked the one where I discussed when I went to the Beah presentation.